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[[K]- SubZero {Rmstr/RMX}]

Sounds like it could be good

your intro pad has some filter that is just pushing the limits of the DB meter. It's a tad too low and makes my headphones rumble a bit too much. If you have any synthes on more then one mixer track try to avoid that, it can mess with the quality of the sound. Try to put limiters on some of your mixer tracks to make sure they don't push the meter to far.

It's good but it needs some mixing work.

[{dj-N} Last Forever]

Beats my mastering

I can't really say I can help you on the mastering. The quality is really good though for your current mix. There is something about the lead I can't really put my finger on. It's good but doesn't feel like it gives the extra push. Maybe it could stand to be just a tad louder, but then again not too loud.

Overall your mixing is good and I suppose you would know about it more then I would so thats just my personal opinion.

dj-Nate responds:

Thanks for that though man; it helps!

[It's Time To Say Goodbye]

Great style

If scores get your hopes low don't let them. You made an emotionally moving piece which sounds unique in its nature. Your style does show in your songs which is great, this one shows it off even more. In comparison to your others I enjoy this one the most so far. The let off and build up at 1:35 just made this song great to me, by far my favorite part of the song.

I've always been told in trance I should keep my kick booming, or more "hearable". It doesn't become overpowered in this song but it doesn't stand out. Overall bringing the kick out would give it less of an ambient feel.

Great song, a good blend of ambient and trance. We should talk and pass music ideas on AIM sometime.

PrEmoEffect responds:

yeah, i really wish they had an ambient trance section, because i think that nice drums are good, but i hate to ruin a song by putting so many empasis on the kick, cuz stuff like this really shouldnt me made hard core, because it takes out the emotions. Yeah, id love to talk, your AIM is mrmilkcarton right? mines PrEmoEffect, so just IM me if you get the chance, or email by [e-mail]

[Magic With In]

Too bad it's so short

Could certainly see this song progressing into a full blown song. Can't really suggest much since 15 seconds doesn't have much to offer in terms of sound so good job.

HelgiB responds:

yeah but its cool now, i've fixed it.

[[K]- Friend]

Try this

Try not to detune your lead, if you do, just use 2 lead sounds. Make one not detuned and then the other one which is a little lower on the volume scale detuned. That way you can keep a clean lead and still have the detuned undertones. At least thats how I would do it.

Clean song just needs a few fixes.

Korpze responds:

I agree it needs fixed, but I dont remember puting any detuning in it.

[(Doc) Far Fetched Dream]

Wow

This is sweet, not something you would normally hear in the DnB section. Normally it's fast and everything is growling. This song stands out to me, it keeps an ambient feel with DnB elements. A great combination thats for sure.

Can't say I've listened to something like this often before.
Good job on this one, keep it up.

[-586rick- amazing]

Needs a climax

The song needs a climax, I was all siked for one to come but it never came :(. Some crazy melody would make this song a winner for me it has all the elements of a build up then it doesn't clmax.

All around the song could of been a winner with a climax.
Good luck on your music making.

586rick responds:

I may re do it better if people thinks it could do a really good song, thanks for the review.

["its a dream"rmx prev..]

It's sounding good

At 1:06 I have to save I love that Arp or Gate that you are using. It sounds awesome if you ask me. Too bad it only lasts about 20 seconds. Your on the right track for this remix keep it up.

sonicxtreme responds:

yea....im working in a song...but i think ill complete this one...thanks

[Technic Tower]

Toxic

Reason Toxic III does that is because you have to buy it lol. FL studios gives you the demo version which does that annoying sweeping sound, it's not your computer you don't have to worry about that. Cool song I almost thought the sweeps were on purpose. Pick up the full version of toxic (if you really like it) and you'll be on your way.

Voted up a 5.

In your spare time if your up for it check out my Trance track {Take Me Away} and tell me what you think.

[-Cringe- |[Glou]|]

Awesome

The title fits the song just right. Has a unique style to it, dark but keeps you listening to it. There are only a few parts that could use some compression to keep the sound from going over the top, but all around its aight as is.

5'ed from me.
If you get a chance check out my new trance song {Take Me Away} and tell me what you think of it would be glad to have your input.

Gloudas responds:

haha right as i finished writing a review for take me away i came and saw this, pretty weird timing
well thanks for the review, you're probably right about the compression but i'll probably just leave it how it is due to laziness :D