Mrmilkcarton's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Karco - Beginnings(Incomplete)]

I'm in your audio reviewing your stuff

Your too pro for me. Wish you would finish it that way I would have more music to add to my play list ;).

Only thing I have to say is its too loud from time, but I already told you this over AIM. :)

Karco responds:

Too pro? Hardly at all. I can spot at least a dozen flaws in this one. XD

Glad you liked it, though, thanks for the review. :)

[4 Marrie MIX [Flame]]

Time certainly went into this

It sounds like you spent alot of time on this mix. It's a good mix that could use some few adjustments.

One thing I would do is make a reverb on the beeps and turn it down a tad. If you add reverb try to give it a wet floating feel. Also maybe some velocity changes or automations on the volume of the beeps to give a feeling of change.

Good job overall, loops very nicely.

[/M: Frozen Mind]

Thanks for the message.

Great song. I don't have much to say about it other then I enjoyed it.

The only thing I will comment is on the synth that enters around 1:40 it has a weird sound. It's almost clear to hear but also has a weird unclean effect to it. Other then that everything else was good.

Keep it up, 5 from me.

Mich responds:

Thanks! That weird sounds, That's a pad, playing the chords. After the breakdown, the strings play the same notes. Maybe I should have chosen another pad :s

Anyway, Thanks for the nice review.

Greets,
MICHhimself

[[TMM43] Where it ends...]

Why only previews?

Are you planning on selling your mixes? Why will we only get previews from now on? I be confused.

None the less you make quality songs worth listening to. Just try to make sure you watch your peaks so they don't go too high cutting the quality down. Other then that fine song.

[Wizex - Can you hear me now?]

Find the samples :)

FL has alot of hidden goodies in it. There are many samples for drums and kicks that are hidden away in the files. Your drums don't sound very Danceish so you gotta find one thats more of a kick just try not to overuse the standard samples too much.

The best way to get attention from your songs is to use original synths that you made using some VSTI. If you do use a preset try to mix and mod the sound so it comes out your style and not preset style. About half of newgrounds knows the presets for sytrus already so try to avoid them.

Once you get a handle of the program the structure of a song will become more apparent with the sounds you are creating to compliment your lead and bass.

If you need any help you can add me up to your AIM list if you want. Can find it on my newgrounds page. Can send a PM too.

Good luckwith your future songs.

[[K]- Live On (REMIX)]

A tad too similar

When you remix you want to add your own little twist to the song. Staying close to the original keeps the same feeling but sometimes you want keep your style and sound. In my latest remix I liked the melody so I kept it but I chose my own transition style and builds in comparison to the actual song.

You did good don't get me wrong. Some spots sounded like they could use a bit more sound but overall good job on the remix of my song.

[-Haze and Waste-]

Cool

It's a cool song but you need to tone down some of the sounds. They are a little loud and kinda distort the sound. It's a single pad thats doing it I think. My headphones rattle from it. When my headphones rattle it usually means something is a bit too loud or has a bit too much bass.

Just watch the clipping here and there and the song sounds good.

Gloudas responds:

hmm yeah I think thats Mr. cello. I'll try to go back and EQ it

[.X. Paradoxon (DEMO)]

Watch For clipping

Wow the full song is gonna be great. Make sure on your drum loops and patterns that you watch the clipping. Your filter in the transition is great but the quality could be worked on a bit more.

Hope to see this one soon. You should send me a PM when you finish it.

[[K]- Destruction]

Nice

Almost thought the song ended at 47 or so seconds. I forgot to see how long it was while listening to it.

On the note of that transition maybe something could be added to help the transition I'm just not sure what. Maybe add a pad somewhere.

[Forever Gamer]

This is Epic

This is such an epic song. Can't stop listening to it. I can only wonder what will be next.

SkyMarshall responds:

Thanks :) I dont know for sure whats next actually. But there will be sininging. Oh .. there will be!